If the animation wasn't so good, I'd given you a 4.

Graphics - Very fine, even for a stick movie. Beautiful effect when he was pushed to the gate and the light was pouring through it. It was great. The effects were marvelous

Animation - Damn good. Everything about it. Only quirk was when the 3 guys teleported down to fight the hero and I really didn't catch them dying.

Story - Not bad. You drew us a picture of what was going on. You didn't have to do that, but you did and it worked. It was basically the set up to an action sequence which you pulled off. Great work.

Sound - Opening song was a great choice. It went well with the blood soaked text. After that the music was complete garbage. I'm not being shallow in terms of musical taste here, it didn't fit. The songs used during the course of your animation up to the end credits were shit and didn't work. It took me out of your movies reality and back to mine. Go for something with a movie quality next time. Movie scores obviously work best. Hans Zimmer, Jerry Goldsmith and James Horner are great composers for this sort of animation.

The end credits song didn't fit either. It was nice, but didn't fit your tone if your setting your movie up with hard metal.

Also wtf - You just had text instead of voice acting at first, then you switched to text and shitty voice acting, then just shitty voice acting. It was fucking terrible. Be consistent. You should have stuck with text and kept the dialogue to a minimum because for one, the dialogue was pointless anyways and two you didn't need it, because you were just showing off your skill as an animator, not story teller.

Presentation - Ok, I guess. I really like the start. You have a great tone set up, we know we're about to see some ass kicked and you deliver. You have some faults, but I wanna see some more work from you. You know how to draw and animate, not just well either. You're actually good.

Cheers.

I'm giving you a 4. If I could I'd give you a 3 1/2 though.

Great drawings. I'm serious. Your take on Humpty was damn cool! The art that is.

For your take on his emotion. It was ok. Not bad, but nothing really special, too short to really analyze which is................well nothing.

Sound was good. Appropriate. It sounded to me at first that you used the song "Tennessee" by Hans Zimmer from the movie Pearl Harbor or a Michael Giachinno song from his score to lost. It was very good nontheless.

I'm giving you a 5/10 though just because your misinterpreting your own movie by calling it "twisted" It's not, nor any where near twisted guy. David Firth creator of "Salad Fingers" and "Milkman" is twisted, Stamper is twisted, Marc M is twisted, You may or may not be twisted.........but this animation isn't. Do us and yourself a favor editing that out.

Serious however.........it is and it could have been great, but instead it was just kinda good. Not bad for a real short........short short short animation.

Pretty awesome. What a step up from the previous.

Graphics - Fitting art style, although it could be better.

Style - Man so many fresh ways to slice up an orc. Kicking, fast hacking, power hack, throwing, throwing a barrel, an explosive barrel, special kill moves. Too sweet. I love the kill animations as well. Getting awesome pleasure from doing a few quick slices then watching the orc stagger bag and fall off a cliff. Very nice.

Sound - Sound FX are top man. What is bogging this down though is there is no score. Where is the Basil Poledouris or fuck it put in some Hans Zimmer, Howard Shore or fucking James Horner. Something man. Anvil of Crom would go well. It's loopable.

Overall - very fun. Favoring this. But add music.

If you could make the length maybe somewhere 45-50 seconds. Plus maybe re-work it a bit to stray from the heavy metal. I want a litle bit of heavy metal, not a lot. Think........Kashmir.

I really want to use this, but I know my opponent will rape me out of principal.

As a strict fan of movie scores you've blown me away. Excellent. Entire piece was great and worth 5,000 praises. Keep making more.